This is the last night, the night when Anita run away with the soldier.
Rafael was a poor crazy man who lived in an old boat-house on the beach in a small fishing village. One day he was well; the next day he was completely mad. He had a strange a terrible story. Nobody knew what happened to him. His mother name was Clara. Always, he was dirty, he had a long hair and long beard and He was very thin. Rafael had a ring around his neck. It was brillant. His father died because a white shark kill him when he was fishing. Reafael hate the sharks, once a month he went to the middle on the sea an kill one per one.
He grew up, tall, strong and good-looking and he fell in love with Anita.
He went mad because he loved Anita and she ran away with the soldier. He work six months to buy a gold ring for anita. He want to propossal her to get married but Anita's father doesnt accept the ofert because hi is poor
One night he went to a bar (with his best clothes) to saw Anita. But the same night Anita went with the soldier.
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Great job, boys!! Please change: "...runs away..." "a strange and terrible..." "...mother's name..." "... had long hair and a ...and he ..." " ...shark killed...""Rafael hated ...""...middle of...and killed one by..." "He worked...Anita." "he wanted to propose to her and ...didn't the proposal ...he was poor." "...to see...."
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