lunes, 2 de junio de 2008

skills in mind writting tip

Writting Tip
We saw that other people drop lot of rubbish and they pollute the atmosphere. That isn’t well. We will die soon if we don’t stop this.
First of all, we think that we can put some dust build of recycling. We can recycle plastic bottles, paper, cardboard, and other things.
It could help to recycle and not making more pollute, and litter in the school.
Secondly we can make more competitions with other schools, that would be great.
Finally we can organize dances for us, because we sometimes get bore and we want to have some parties.
That is what we think. Did you like it?
Vera Fenández and Florencia Dabbah.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Fantastic! Please correct: "Skills in Mind . Writng Tip" "...that some people..." " can recycle some garbage." "We could... not make more pollution or litter at school.""... get bored..."