lunes, 23 de junio de 2008

the ring

Anita was beautiful, the most beautiful child in the town. Everyone love her. They smiled when they saw her. Every year she was most beautiful than before.
Her father was Rodrigo, the shoperkeeper. He love her most than other people, and he love her more than he love his other daughter and his suns. He never let her go out with other boys of the village. Rodrigo had big plans for anita's future, he wanted to married her with a rich and important man, perhaps a man from the town.
She was very clever because her father teach her to write and read.
She loved reading stories of princess and prince, and she remembered everything that she read.
When she was nine or ten she sat down a tree near the house and she tell stories to her little brothers and sisters.
Rafael loved her very much and they saied her loved him too, but they can't be together because her dad didn't let her.
Poor Rodrigo, she loved Anita very much and she has lot of hopes for her.
When Anita ran away Rodrigo get mad.

Vera Fernandez y Florencia Dabbah.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Great job, girls! Just change: "The Ring" "...loved her.""...more beautiful..." "...shopkeeper." "...loved ...loved ... loved ... daughters and sons.""...Anita's future: ...her to marry a rich..." "...taught her ..." ...princesses and princes..." "...and told stories..." "...people said she loved him too, ...couldn't...." "...he had lots..." "...away, Rodrigo got..."