martes, 1 de julio de 2008

the soldier

The soldier was very famous in the village because when he arrived on the village with a boat with an engine, he told people his travels around the world. He was very handsome. He had bright eyes and long dark hair.
He was a soldier, a sailor, a fisherman, and had other jobs.
He could get anything that he wanted. And he fell in love with Anita, and Rafael, too.
But the difference was that the soldier was richer than Rafael.
One day he disappeared and Anita, too. But nobody knows If they went together.


by melanie and sabrina

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Well done! Pay attention to: "The Soldier" "... about his trips..."