lunes, 23 de junio de 2008

The Ring

Rafael:
He is mad; he lives in the beach in a very old boat, we think that he got mad because the soldier escaped with Anita.
His father died, he didn't have any brothers or sisters, his mother gives some food and drink to Rafael when he is in his boat, he felt in love with Anita so, he go to the port to won some money to buy a ring to Anita. The father of Anita (Rodrigo) doesn´t let Anita marry him because he is poor.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Leonardo: Please pay attention to tenses and change: "His mother gave him some food and drink when he was..." "he fell in ...went ...to win...for Anita." "Anita's father... didn't let her marry ...was..."