lunes, 23 de junio de 2008
Anita's description by pablo y lisandro
We describe anita: She was a beautiful child . Most children are beautiful but she was the most beautiful child that he has ever seen .everyone love her little children,old people,men and women.They are loved anita.they smiled when they saw her.And year after year she grew up,and year after year she grew more beautiful
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Your description is too short.Pay more attention when you write and please change:"...have described..." "...child you have ever seen. Everyone loved her:...""They all..." "They..."And year after year she grew..."
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