lunes, 2 de junio de 2008

Making a best school

I ´m going to tell my ideas to make a best place:
First of all we have to try to not throw letter in the school (anywere) because we won´t care if we throw just a paper to the floor because is just one, but now think if everybodie of this school (arround 2500 persons) throw one paper. Our school will be a totally caos.
Finally we would have to change the launch times, because if all the persons of the school (except 1º) go at the same time to launch we cant launch in pease. And if you think, is a problem because what we have to eat in 1 hour we eat on 15 minutes and then it makes stomachache and estress.
So, we area ll together and we can change this problems.

Robertino Mónaco 2º B

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Fantastic! Please correct: "Making a Better School" "...to write about ...make school a better place for all of us. " ...throw litter...(or anywhere) ...we generally don't care when we throw just a piece of... because itis... ." "...just think what would happen if everybody at ...(around...people) threw one piece of ... " ...change lunch time...all the students...lunch...we can't have lunch in peace." "...it is a problem...in fifteen... produces us ...and stress." "...are all ...these problems."